Secrets

Dear ugene,

I have something dearly devastation to tell you but I just can not get it out of my chest. Last summer I was tall, black long hair, and muscles. This year I'm tall, muscles no hair, and shy. I do not know how this happened but I have a pretty good idea that someone was behind it. I was asleep when I still had my hair and when I woke up, it was gone like a ghost. It disappeared like that. What was interesting was that whoever did this left the razor in my bed, and the hair. I have a few suspects in mind but no clear evidence to who had done this to me. My precious hair lay dead on my bed. Why who would do this to me. I wish that you could help find out who did this to me. By the way didn't u leave your razor on my bed when you stayed the night before you left?

                                        Sincerely,

                                          Luis Ramos 

Atmosphere is most effective

Out of the three elements, atmosphere, action, and supernatural, I think atmosphere is the most effective of them all. I say this because in Freinkonstein, when victors creates the monster, the only supernatural element that he possessed or mentioned in the story was super speed. I do not think action is the most effective either because there is not a lot of action that has happened. Their is more tension, build up, and mystery in the story. Atmosphere is the most effective because Mary Shelley does a lot of build up in the story. An example is, " we crossed re ice, therefore, and ascended; we entered the hut, the fiend with an air of exultation, I with a heavy heart and depressed spirits. The atmosphere is most effective, because it describes the settings and moods. It develops the terror, and horror needed in a gothic literature. Atmosphere is effective over supernatural and action because it develops the setting and sets the the tone and mood of the story for the characters ,and plot in a gothic story

Freinkonstein

The opening to Mary Shelley's book "Freinkonstein" is introducing the characters and their background information. She discusses about Beaufort, and his bestfriend along with beauforts daughter Caroline and how beauforts dies in his daughters

Arms. She goes on about the families and new relationships that happen after beauforts death. Mary continues to talk about the family and introducing characters throughout chapter one. The way I would write a ghost story is I would start off the same way as Mary Shelley did in Freinkonstein, but with more terror, darkness and blood. I would write the story this way, because I believe the author should always introduce the characters to the reader. Next I would also start the story in a dark way, because ghost stories are usually meant to be terrifying and scary. Also starting off the story this way sets the moods and tensions of the story, and appeals to the readers emotions in a dark type of way. Starting off the story this way defines the setting, what we are expected to read and gives a sense of tone and mood.

Invisibility

I would rather have the power or ability of invisibility over the power of flying. First because invisibility has more uses and purposes than flying. When u can fly around, that is all u do. I I had the power of invisibility, I could do stuff and not get caught because no one would know who did it. I would pull pranks on people and not have to suffer the consequences because how coul they tell it was me. I would pull pranks like knock knock zoom zoom and not have to run away. I would act like a ghost in some random persons house. I would act like a certain house is haunted. I could also use this power for good and not for my entertainment. I would be the best secret detective. I would stalk down enemy's without being seen. I can fight enemy's without them seeing me, which gives me the advantage. That's why I would choose invisibility over flying.

Trust

One time I convinced my mother to get me a xbox console. I told her that I would get honor roll, and behave at home. I also told her that I would do my chores, and keep the house clean. It took a long time but I did all my requirements. Soon my mom got the Xbox but told me that I had to keep up what I was doing. It took a while to get the Xbox because she tested me to see if I would fulfill the requirements. I had to sweet talk her, and talk to her sincerely, I did not give her an attitude or a smart mouth. I gained her trust and she got it for me. I was so excited but I knew that if I wanted to keep the Xbox that I should keep up what I was doing to get the Xbox. That is how I convinced my mom to get my xbox.

Essay paragraph

Facing the walls that stood in my path to success, and accomplishing them, I had set aspirations. Finishing Early college I hope to attend college to get my criminal juatice degree, or to get a degree in arts. Hoping to work as an FBI profiler , or work on entertainment arts. Also I would like to progress through life to better myself. Even though I had difficult challenges, I conquered them all and now hope to brighten my future.

The OGT test I am worried about?

The test for the OGT that I am most concerned and worried about is the science portion. I am most concerned about this test in particular because I do no feel prepared. Science has been the most difficult subject to understand my entire life. Before I had gotten into early college, I felt like I have not learned anything in science, but these past 2 years I have learned so much about it. Another reason why I am worried about it is because it was my least favorite subject and because of that I have not learned a lot about it because it was not Bert interesting to me. What I plan on doing to change my attitude towards the test and prepare myself is to go on the OGT practice websites. These websites have practice OGT questions that were on previous tests and if I can have a good understanding of the question I will be fine on the OGT.