Thursday, September 5, 2013

My Name

Luis was my moms
One and only
Although I look clueless I am
One of the coolest.
My mom called me her little man

Luis Angel Ramos
That is my name.
My name is something I take pride in.
I treat others good
Because I like how
Others talk about my name

The feelings my name
Gives me is excitement.
My name fits my personality
Because I bring a lot of joy and laughter.

My name is short like
Spud Webb from the nba.
I got my name because I needed one and my grandma
Wanted my name to be that way.

Luis is pronounced with 2 syllables. Clap clap.
My name spikes many questions and has a lot
Of history to it.

My name can be said either in English or Spanish.
This name was mostly population France in the Middle Ages
But the spelling of the name was more popular in America.
This is why my name is so important to me.
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16 comments:

  1. UnknownSeptember 10, 2013 at 10:42 AM

    I like how you stated facts about your life . Good job

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  2. Bryson BSeptember 10, 2013 at 10:42 AM

    I like how you compared your name to spud Webb lol

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  3. Leanna TSeptember 10, 2013 at 10:43 AM

    I liked your figurative language. It was a good poem :)

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  4. Jessi MadakSeptember 10, 2013 at 10:43 AM

    I liked the simplicity and the onomatopoeia :D Woo good job!!

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  5. Adrianna RosadoSeptember 10, 2013 at 10:43 AM

    Loved your confidence while reading your poem (: really made a difference in how the poem was interpreted.

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  6. Tori C.September 10, 2013 at 10:43 AM

    I liked how you said you take pride in your name, and that you enjoy it. You were very honest and informative in your poem. It was great.

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  7. Justin whyelSeptember 10, 2013 at 10:43 AM

    I like that you said "clap clap" it made me laugh on the inside

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  8. Zack G.September 10, 2013 at 10:43 AM

    I liked how you shared with us information about your family. Also how you gave us your whole name.

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  9. Destanie CamarilloSeptember 10, 2013 at 10:43 AM

    I like how you talked about who picked out your name, and the origin of it. Very nice.

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  10. SanjanaSSeptember 10, 2013 at 10:43 AM

    I liked how you included historical background in your poem. (:

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  11. LeahSeptember 10, 2013 at 10:43 AM

    I like when you said 'although I look clueless I am one of the coolest' I thought that was neat

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  12. juarketsquareSeptember 10, 2013 at 10:43 AM

    Luis, great work. Why did you compare your name to Spud Webb

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  13. Darrian MeadowsSeptember 10, 2013 at 10:43 AM

    I liked how you gave a history of how you got your name and what your name meant. Your middle name is cool too.

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  14. Champion of the GlaceonSeptember 10, 2013 at 10:44 AM

    I am sorry for cutting you off and correcting your grammar. It was a great poem.

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  15. Gabriella MogusSeptember 10, 2013 at 10:44 AM

    It was good & I liked how you truly speaked your mind about your name . Good job .

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  16. Tiffany PaterSeptember 10, 2013 at 10:44 AM

    I liked it!! :) good job:) you gave a lot of examples in it and it made you stand out. Love the middle name by the way!!!!!

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