Friday, September 20, 2013
The thing I value the most
The thing I care about most or value is my chess trophy. I value my chess trophy because it was 1st place. It also is important because I worked really hard to get that trophy. This trophy is also important because I was undefeated at this tournament. Another reason why this trophy was important is because before the tournament I told my friend that I would get 1st place, and win undefeated. This trophy was also for my grandpa who passed away. I took an oath before this tournament that I would win this for him. Then when I had won the trophy I became so excited. I was so excited because the oath I took became reality. I had one the trophy, and gotten first, and was undefeated. During my grandpas funeral I told him that I won this trophy for him. My grandma then tells me If he was alive that he would be proud of me. I also Value this trophy, because everytime I look at this trophy it shows me what I accomplished. This is what I value the most.
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Luis,
ReplyDeleteI am very proud of you for winning your chess trophy! That is very exciting.
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